Thursday, 3 May 2018

AFFLICTED Episode 5-6

REV. OBUOBI
Please, Kesewaa, I know it hurts! But, please, give me just a month, okay? If nothing happens in a month, you’ll know that I’m a liar! But remember, the blindness and paralysis he has put on you will be reversed on his mother! That will be the beginning and the first sign God will give you, so let’s just wait and see, okay?
BISHOP OSUANYI
(gently)
My dear Kesewaa, God loves you, okay? Just use what happened today to know that the Reverend will not lie to you! It is hard, I know, but you have to be strong!
Mr. NYANTAKYI
My darling daughter, surely a month is not that long to wait, right? Let’s just wait, okay?
Kesewaa is deeply troubled.
Tears glisten on her eyelashes as she looks at the man of God with wounded eyes.
KESEWAA
Akoto is not like that. He loves me, and I love him. It is a genuine love, please, I beg of you all. Don’t do this to us!
She turns and enters the car.
Her parents speak to the pastors for a while, and they also enter the car.
Kesewaa is sitting alone in the back, and Obuobi approaches her.
He opens the door and hands her a white envelope so that no one sees it, and he speaks softly.
REV. OBUOBI
It is for you, my dear. I hope it can keep you for a month as we wait to see whether I’m a liar or not. God wants to change your life, my dear.
When the car moves off Kesewaa opens the envelope.
It contains a cheque of Ghc 20,000 made out in her name.
Kesewaa is stunned as she stares at the cheque, and then a warm glow fills her cheeks.
She smiles and puts the cheque in her bag.
Her expression is no longer worried.
It is now uncertain.
SOME DAYS LATER
Amina looks at her friend with incredulity, and then she begins to laugh and shake her head.
They are sitting on park benches inside the LEGON BOTANICAL GARDENS.
Kesewaa has finished telling Amina all that has been going on.
AMINA
(floored)
Jesus, Kes! So you want me to go to A.N’s place and tell him you travelled? Does it mean you haven’t spoken to him since your Dad’s birthday?
KESEWAA
(distraught)
I’m scared, Amina! Can’t you see that? I’m very scared! Every day that Pastor performs astounding miracles in the church! He just wants me to wait for one month! That’s all. Please, do this for me!
AMINA
(sadly)
You’re so stupid, my friend! How long have you known A.N? He has been there for you all these years! He’s never looked at another woman! He’s cared for you and your family, Kes! And now this supposed man of God gives you twenty thousand G.H. and he’s suddenly a God to you and Akoto has become a demon? Are you kidding me, Kes?
she is breathing hard with contempt for her friend.
AMINA
Can you quantify what Akoto has done for you? He bought a house for your parents! He bought a car for your father and for you! He’s footed your Mom’s bills! He gives you anything you ask for! And, most important of all, he loves you enough to wait four years without trying to make love to you, waiting patiently to take you to the altar and make you his wife! He’s a millionaire, young and handsome!
She glares at here friend with fury.
AMINA
He can’t have all girls, that’s for sure, but believe me, he can have many, many, many girls if he chooses to, myself included! But he has been faithful to you only, and now you’re ready to jilt him because of what some hungry pastor is saying?
KESEWAA
(shouting)
Stop it, Amina! I’m not asking for the world! I’ve not even broken up with Akoto! All I’m saying is that I have to keep away from him for a month, okay? Just a month, and I want you to help me! He needn’t know the reason why I’m keeping away from him!
AMINA
Needn’t know? Akoto seems like a fool to you? He has been so devastated since the day that man called him a devil worshipper right in front of your eyes and you did nothing about it! You can’t do this to Akoto, Kes! You’re coming with me, and we’re going to tell him all that is happening! I won’t let you lie that you travelled and there’s no network at the place you are and bullshit like that! You’re coming with me now!
KESEWAA
(scared)
No, no, Amina! Please! The Reverend says if I go to Akoto’s place it’ll be bad! He says God has reversed the blindness and paralysis Akoto planned for me on to his mother!
AMINA
(exasperated)
Don’t be silly! God can’t be that bias, can He? He’ll put Akoto’s sins on his mother? Good heavens, girlfriend! You’ve always been telling me that God is love! Even a human being like me wouldn’t punish an innocent person for somebody’s wrong, how much more God! You’re coming with me, Kes! Please don’t treat Akoto like this, please! He deserves better!
Amina stands up and drags her friend by the arm.
Akoto stays at the Westlands in Haatso, so it doesn’t take them long to get there.
Kesewaa, obviously in great distress, drives into the spacious compound when the gates are opened by the security guard.
Akoto, a man who loves gardens, has converted the driveway from the main gates to the building into a gigantic expanse of green beauty.
The ground is a lush green, as smooth and as huge as a golf course.
There are clusters of flowers and exotic plants at specific points of this incredible green expanse.
A gym and swimming pool areas can be seen in the distance, but Kesewaa barely sees them.
She drives up to the great, sprawling white house.
Akoto’s house is a thing of beauty!
Huge, white and designed with great architectural finesse, it looks like a huge hawk when viewed aerially from a helicopter.
Three of Akoto’s cars are parked in the carport when they arrive.
Kesewaa sits in the car for a long time even though Amina has gotten out.
For one wild moment she thinks of reversing and getting out of the place, but she knows Amina is right.
She loves Akoto too much to treat him like this.
She sighs miserably and gets out of the car, and then she joins Amina, and they walk to the front door and press the doorbell.
Kesewaa knows that the security man has already called ahead, as usual, to inform Akoto and his mother that Kesewaa is on her way up.
The door is opened by Maame Akua.
She is wearing a kaba and slit attire, the official dress of the Women’s Movement of the church she attends.
Around her head is a lovely white and gold scarf.
Her handbag is draped across her shoulder and she is holding her Bible.
She smiles happily at them, obviously relieved.
MAAME AKUA
(sweetly)
Oh, Kesewaa, my beautiful golden daughter-in-law! Why have you left us for so long? You’ve made my son lose a lot of weight, my dear! I’m glad you’re here. Unfortunately, I’m on my way to a church programme. Hope I’ll come back and meet you here. Welcome too, Amina!
Amina smiles and hugs the woman briefly.
AMINA
Thank you, Ma. Yes, we’ll be here waiting for you!
Meanwhile, inside his office in the church, Reverend Obuobi is standing looking out of the window.
He is slowly unwrapping a strange candy.
He puts the wrapper into his pocket and twirls the candy three times.
REV. OBUOBI
Here we go… here we go now!
He puts the candy into his mouth slowly…
And, in Akoto’s hhouse, Kesewaa smiles tightly, but she makes no attempt to speak or touch the Maame Akua.
This causes Maame Akua to look at her with some sort of concern.
When they enter the luxurious living-room they see Akoto emerging from an inner room.
He is in black jeans and an open white shirt and he comes towards Kesewaa with his heart on his face.
He is so much in love with her.
AKOTO
Oh, Kes, my love, my darling! Why are you doing this to me and causing me this great pain? Why are you allowing that fool to separate us?
Kesewaa’s face crumbles with the pain of the love she feels for him.
She sees his agony, and it tears her heart apart to know she is the cause of all that pain in Akoto’s heart!

Episode 6
Kesewaa blinks the tears out of her eyes as she looks at Akoto.
This man has loved her, has respected her, and has taken care of all her needs for almost four years.
He has never touched her in any sexual way, but has waited patiently for the day they will be married.
KESEWAA
(tearfully)
Oh, A. N! My love!
She is walking towards him with arms stretched, when it happens!
Up in his office, still facing the window, Reverend Obuobi moves the toffee in his mouth to his molars.
REV. OBUOBI
Aaaand… it happens!
He chomps down hard on the candy between his teeth, breaking it to pieces in his mouth!
In Akoto’s house Maame Akua suddenly makes a guttural noise deep down in her throat, and all eyes turn to her.
She is trembling, and the Bible drops from her hands.
She sways, and as she looks at them, sweat covers her face, and her eyes begin to roll!
Her irises roll upward, and suddenly her whole face becomes slack, her mouth opening and saliva drooling out.
AMINA
(terrified)
MAMA!!
AKOTO
(panicking)
MOTHER!!!
Kesewaa looks on with sudden fear!
It is happening!
Just as Reverend Obuobi has warned!
This is it!
Akoto has planned blindness and paralysis for her, and the pastor has said God will reverse it and put it on Akoto’s mother!
Only the white sclera of Maame Akua’s eyes are showing.
MAAME AKUA
(slurring, drooling)
I can’t… oh, Lord! Akoto, my son, I can’t see anything… I can’t feel my body!
Suddenly her fingers begin to coil into claw-like appendages!
Her legs, and her arms, and her neck twist round at awkward angles, and her jaw slacks further, emitting thick foamy saliva, and then she begins to fall!
Akoto and Amina are running towards her.
The distraught man catches his mother before she falls down, and he begins to shout in anguish!
AKOTO
(terrified)
Mother! Mother! Oh, Mother!! Kes, please, call an ambulance! Quickly, please!
Tears are flooding Kesewaa’s face as she looks down at them.
She is weeping and shaking her head.
She points an accusing finger at Akoto.
KESEWAA
(weeping)
Thank you, Akoto! Thank you very much! So this is what you planned for me! If it hadn’t been for the prayers of Reverend Obuobi, I’ll be the one lying down like this!
Akoto looks at her with total incomprehension.
AKOTO
(agonised)
Goodness me! What did you say? What are you talking about, my love…what is the meaning of this?
KESEWAA
(weeping)
I never realized you could be so wicked, Akoto! How could you? How could you do this to me? May God forgive you!
AMINA
(aghast)
Kes! What’s wrong with you? Can’t you see what’s happening?
AKOTO
(in great emotional pain)
What? What’s the meaning of this? What’s going on?
Kesewaa runs past them.
She goes outside, jumps into her car, starts up, and speeds out of the house, leaving Akoto holding his mother, shocked and staring after her with sadness, incomprehension and mounting horror!
To be continued

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